求代码查错/优化，自制必杀技，为什么我的犯罪代码无效？

gunship

自己作了一个必杀技，想法是用必杀技攻击非战斗状态的非邪恶NPC被探测到时触发犯罪,犯罪代码（红色部分）不知怎么的无效，其他正常,求高人援手，感谢！
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if(skill == 0)
return
else
set timer to timer + getsecondspassed
if (skill == 1)
  player.pickidle
  if (timer > 0.3)
   victim.playsound WPNHitHand
   player.PushActorAway victim  15

   if (victim.getdead == 0)&&(victim.getactorvalue health > 0)  /*另一个quest脚本中已经判断victim不为空且为actor才被传递*/
     if (victim.iscreature)
      if (victim.getactorvalue health) < power
       ModPCMiscStat 5 1
      endif
     elseif (victim.isactorevil == 0) && (victim.iscreature == 0)&&(victim.isincombat == 0)
      messagebox "CrimeExecute"
      if ((victim.getactorvalue health) < power)
       ModPCMiscStat 32 1
       ModPCMiscStat 6 1
       messageboxex "victimdead"
       if player.IsActorDetected
        messagebox "beendetectvictimdead"
        player.ModCrimeGold 1000
       endif
      else
       ModPCMiscStat 31 1
       messageboxex "victimlive"
       if player.IsActorDetected
        messagebox "beendetectvictimlive"
        player.ModCrimeGold 20
       endif
      endif
     endif
    endif

   victim.modactorvalue2 health (0-power)   
   victim.startcombat player
   set timer to 0
   set skill to 0
  endif
elseif (skill == 2)
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